FREE Delivery on all electricals: Click here Welcome Guest. Please login or register for full access to the forum. Post a FREE comment about Not Needed Anymore Not Needed Anymore Click here to display links and pictures Goto page 1, 2  Next          ukevents.net Forum Index -> Creative Writing View previous topic  View next topic  Author Message janejade Joined: 21 Oct 2004 Posts: 78 Location: Northants UK Tell a Friend Posted: Fri Oct 22, 2004 8:13 pm    Post subject: Not Needed Anymore   ok, another set of song lyrics I wrote :smt024 to help give my daughter inspiration in her McFly fanfic - as you'll gather from the tone, two of her characters were due to split. :violent1: janejade (aka Yvonne) NOT NEEDED ANYMORE We met just once and I knew You were the one for me We touched that day and I Felt, instant chemistry. We loved, we laughed, we played Life then for me was great How could I ever have Known what lay in wait Chorus My heart you kept My life you own My soul is yours to hold But you shut me out ‘Cos you don’t want me I’m not needed anymore The time has passed and now you’ve Changed, you’ve suddenly turned away Where once we laughed and loved We now fight, nothing left to say Chorus I tried to reach you, calling out Your name, but you won’t come Half of me’s missing now Like the moon without the sun Chorus Yeah, my heart, my life, my soul I’ve lost ‘Cos I’m not needed anymore No, I’m not needed anymore You don’t want me anymore (Fade) Back to top   Jon1983uk Joined: 12 Oct 2004 Posts: 4423 Tell a Friend Posted: Fri Oct 22, 2004 9:07 pm    Post subject:   Coolio! Another good piece o' literature! :) How d'ya play this song then? Back to top   janejade Joined: 21 Oct 2004 Posts: 78 Location: Northants UK Tell a Friend Posted: Fri Oct 22, 2004 9:37 pm    Post subject: Not Needed Anymore   No idea - make up a tune I guess lol I just write the words, would love to know more about music but too much to do, not enough hours etc. :lol: Back to top   Jon1983uk Joined: 12 Oct 2004 Posts: 4423 Tell a Friend Posted: Fri Oct 22, 2004 9:48 pm    Post subject:   Ah gotcha. Thought that could be the case but didn't want it to sound offensive, so I played the dumb card. :D I' love to learn music myself too but I'm in the hunt for a good teacher since I have limited motivation for anything remotely hard, as my keyboard lying above the cupboard in my room since Chrimbo 2002 will testify :D Back to top   janejade Joined: 21 Oct 2004 Posts: 78 Location: Northants UK Tell a Friend Posted: Fri Oct 22, 2004 10:21 pm    Post subject:   No prob. Never know, one day I might have a famous musical daughter who can set them to music, or get something published (goes off into a daydream - name in print - nah) :lol: Back to top   Jon1983uk Joined: 12 Oct 2004 Posts: 4423 Tell a Friend Posted: Sat Oct 23, 2004 1:20 am    Post subject:   Hehe, you'll won't feed her until she promises to dedicate her albums to ya :D Back to top   Macs34 Joined: 25 Mar 2004 Posts: 3467 Location: Kenya Tell a Friend Posted: Mon Oct 25, 2004 4:07 pm    Post subject:   The poem has a stream though. Jon1983uk, is that the behaviour of mothers to their daughters who become songbirds? Macs Back to top   Mullin Joined: 16 Aug 2004 Posts: 20062 Location: Ivybridge Tell a Friend Posted: Mon Oct 25, 2004 4:11 pm    Post subject:   Awww yeah that is really good! :D Back to top   Jon1983uk Joined: 12 Oct 2004 Posts: 4423 Tell a Friend Posted: Mon Oct 25, 2004 4:11 pm    Post subject:   Hehe, nope. I'd hope not anyway! :o :lol: Back to top   ash_the_minx Joined: 04 Jul 2004 Posts: 12159 Location: cumbria!! Tell a Friend Posted: Wed Oct 27, 2004 6:31 pm    Post subject: Re: Not Needed Anymore   janejade wrote: ok, another set of song lyrics I wrote :smt024 to help give my daughter inspiration in her McFly fanfic - as you'll gather from the tone, two of her characters were due to split. :violent1: janejade (aka Yvonne) NOT NEEDED ANYMORE We met just once and I knew You were the one for me We touched that day and I Felt, instant chemistry. We loved, we laughed, we played Life then for me was great How could I ever have Known what lay in wait Chorus My heart you kept My life you own My soul is yours to hold But you shut me out ‘Cos you don’t want me I’m not needed anymore The time has passed and now you’ve Changed, you’ve suddenly turned away Where once we laughed and loved We now fight, nothing left to say Chorus I tried to reach you, calling out Your name, but you won’t come Half of me’s missing now Like the moon without the sun Chorus Yeah, my heart, my life, my soul I’ve lost ‘Cos I’m not needed anymore No, I’m not needed anymore You don’t want me anymore (Fade) I can Imagine that eing played to the backing music of My immortal by Evanesence Back to top   janejade Joined: 21 Oct 2004 Posts: 78 Location: Northants UK Tell a Friend Posted: Wed Oct 27, 2004 9:30 pm    Post subject: Re: Not Needed Anymore   ash_the_minx wrote: janejade wrote: ok, another set of song lyrics I wrote :smt024 to help give my daughter inspiration in her McFly fanfic - as you'll gather from the tone, two of her characters were due to split. :violent1: janejade (aka Yvonne) NOT NEEDED ANYMORE We met just once and I knew You were the one for me We touched that day and I Felt, instant chemistry. We loved, we laughed, we played Life then for me was great How could I ever have Known what lay in wait Chorus My heart you kept My life you own My soul is yours to hold But you shut me out ‘Cos you don’t want me I’m not needed anymore The time has passed and now you’ve Changed, you’ve suddenly turned away Where once we laughed and loved We now fight, nothing left to say Chorus I tried to reach you, calling out Your name, but you won’t come Half of me’s missing now Like the moon without the sun Chorus Yeah, my heart, my life, my soul I’ve lost ‘Cos I’m not needed anymore No, I’m not needed anymore You don’t want me anymore (Fade) I can Imagine that eing played to the backing music of My immortal by Evanesence Hey, yeah, that does kinda work doesn't it?? thanks for that. Take care of youz Yvonne (aka.janejade) Back to top   Mullin Joined: 16 Aug 2004 Posts: 20062 Location: Ivybridge Tell a Friend Posted: Thu Oct 28, 2004 8:53 am    Post subject: Re: Not Needed Anymore   ash_the_minx wrote: janejade wrote: ok, another set of song lyrics I wrote :smt024 to help give my daughter inspiration in her McFly fanfic - as you'll gather from the tone, two of her characters were due to split. :violent1: janejade (aka Yvonne) NOT NEEDED ANYMORE We met just once and I knew You were the one for me We touched that day and I Felt, instant chemistry. We loved, we laughed, we played Life then for me was great How could I ever have Known what lay in wait Chorus My heart you kept My life you own My soul is yours to hold But you shut me out ‘Cos you don’t want me I’m not needed anymore The time has passed and now you’ve Changed, you’ve suddenly turned away Where once we laughed and loved We now fight, nothing left to say Chorus I tried to reach you, calling out Your name, but you won’t come Half of me’s missing now Like the moon without the sun Chorus Yeah, my heart, my life, my soul I’ve lost ‘Cos I’m not needed anymore No, I’m not needed anymore You don’t want me anymore (Fade) I can Imagine that eing played to the backing music of My immortal by Evanesence Yeah right! It could couldnt it! :D Back to top   Rooz Joined: 11 Nov 2004 Posts: 19 Location: behind ma computer Tell a Friend Posted: Thu Nov 11, 2004 1:34 pm    Post subject:   wooOOw Goood! :D 8) Back to top   janejade Joined: 21 Oct 2004 Posts: 78 Location: Northants UK Tell a Friend Posted: Thu Nov 11, 2004 2:14 pm    Post subject:   Thanks for that hun. Take care Yvonne Back to top   ~~debbydo~~ Joined: 18 Jul 2005 Posts: 19958 Location: Hertfordshire Tell a Friend Posted: Thu Sep 01, 2005 8:23 am    Post subject:   its really good .. Back to top     Click here to reply to this message        ukevents.net Forum Index -> Creative Writing Goto page 1, 2  Next Page 1 of 2 Powered by phpBB Search Engine Indexer Powered by phpBB Group