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reddevilleanne
Joined: 20 Oct 2004
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Location: Nottingham
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| Tell a Friend Posted: Sat Jul 30, 2005 2:48 pm Post subject: Random, unfinished and depressing poem.. |
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Well, I wrote this a few days ago when I was really down. It aint finished yet though, here's what I've done so far:
My fears burn holes through me,
If only people could see what this is doing to me.
Maybe then they could stop these feelings from eating away at my insides.
They could teach me how to cure the thoughts that penetrate my mind.
I scream out for the pain that surrounds me,
But no body hears,
No body cares.
I try to break free,
But too much is in front of me.
I can’t escape from this world of hatred,
And release myself to where I wanna be.
Days are hard and nights are unbearable,
I try to keep myself from thinking about my misery,
But nothing works… Only one person can save me. |
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~~debbydo~~
Joined: 18 Jul 2005
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Location: Hertfordshire
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| Tell a Friend Posted: Sat Jul 30, 2005 6:18 pm Post subject: |
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pingu its very good ...
and i know where your comming from ...
keep up the good work and maybe that one person will see you through ..
thinking of you ... [smilie=mylove.gif] |
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reddevilleanne
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Location: Nottingham
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| Tell a Friend Posted: Sat Jul 30, 2005 8:28 pm Post subject: |
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| Thanks :) |
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~~debbydo~~
Joined: 18 Jul 2005
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| Tell a Friend Posted: Sun Jul 31, 2005 12:23 pm Post subject: |
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| come on i want to read more ... :smt038 :smt079 |
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reddevilleanne
Joined: 20 Oct 2004
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Location: Nottingham
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| Tell a Friend Posted: Sun Jul 31, 2005 2:14 pm Post subject: |
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| I'll try and write some new ones tonight if you want.. |
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~~debbydo~~
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| Tell a Friend Posted: Sun Jul 31, 2005 2:25 pm Post subject: |
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| yes they are really good and they may help you if you put it down on paper ..... |
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reddevilleanne
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| Tell a Friend Posted: Sun Jul 31, 2005 2:28 pm Post subject: |
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| Nah, I find it alot easier to type it all on the computer instead of writing it all down. |
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~~debbydo~~
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| Tell a Friend Posted: Sun Jul 31, 2005 2:36 pm Post subject: |
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| i have to write everything down as i will forget .. |
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reddevilleanne
Joined: 20 Oct 2004
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Location: Nottingham
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| Tell a Friend Posted: Sun Jul 31, 2005 2:37 pm Post subject: |
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| But I'd lose the paper.. like I have done with 100s of my poems :lol: |
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~~debbydo~~
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| Tell a Friend Posted: Tue Aug 02, 2005 2:04 pm Post subject: |
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| ermm prob why i have fogotton what i should do :smt011 |
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reddevilleanne
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Location: Nottingham
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| Tell a Friend Posted: Tue Aug 02, 2005 2:33 pm Post subject: |
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| lol Aww! |
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~~debbydo~~
Joined: 18 Jul 2005
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| Tell a Friend Posted: Tue Aug 02, 2005 2:46 pm Post subject: |
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| dumb dumb dumb thats me ..... |
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reddevilleanne
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| Tell a Friend Posted: Tue Aug 02, 2005 3:01 pm Post subject: |
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| You're not dumb! |
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~~debbydo~~
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| Tell a Friend Posted: Tue Aug 02, 2005 3:40 pm Post subject: |
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no ...
just a bit dence ... :smt005 |
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reddevilleanne
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| Tell a Friend Posted: Tue Aug 02, 2005 4:15 pm Post subject: |
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| Aww :lol: |
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