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reddevilleanne
Joined: 20 Oct 2004
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Location: Nottingham
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| Tell a Friend Posted: Mon Jul 24, 2006 3:12 pm Post subject: Poem: ''Gone'' |
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This is a poem I just wrote about someone I had to say goodbye to on Friday.
“Gone”
Now you’re gone,
I’m distracting my mind,
Trying to think of anything else,
But all I think about is you.
You were everything,
Everything I ever wanted.
You were the stars in the sky,
The water in the ocean.
I just let you slip away,
And disappear from my life.
How could I be so stupid?
Why didn’t I tell you?
Why couldn’t you see,
That you meant everything to me?
If I could have you,
I wouldn’t need anything else in the world.
You were the words I spoke,
The air I breathed.
You are perfect,
In every possible way.
I love you.
I just wish I could’ve told you. |
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~~debbydo~~
Joined: 18 Jul 2005
Posts: 19689
Location: Hertfordshire
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| Tell a Friend Posted: Mon Jul 24, 2006 3:44 pm Post subject: |
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| Thats lovely leanne ... |
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reddevilleanne
Joined: 20 Oct 2004
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Location: Nottingham
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| Tell a Friend Posted: Mon Jul 24, 2006 6:58 pm Post subject: |
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| It's depressing, I'm sorry.. lol. XD |
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~~debbydo~~
Joined: 18 Jul 2005
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Location: Hertfordshire
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| Tell a Friend Posted: Mon Jul 24, 2006 7:33 pm Post subject: |
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| No it's lovely .. |
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reddevilleanne
Joined: 20 Oct 2004
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Location: Nottingham
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| Tell a Friend Posted: Mon Jul 24, 2006 10:01 pm Post subject: |
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| Glad you like it. =] |
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ukevents.net
Joined: 15 Dec 2003
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| Tell a Friend Posted: Sun Aug 06, 2006 3:46 pm Post subject: |
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| Its a good poem Pingu.. sometimes its easier to write thing down than to say it out loud |
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reddevilleanne
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Location: Nottingham
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| Tell a Friend Posted: Sun Aug 06, 2006 4:24 pm Post subject: |
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| Indeed! |
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