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mcflyfan2005



Joined: 15 Feb 2005
Posts: 179

Tell a Friend Posted: Tue May 31, 2005 4:35 pm    Post subject: LOSING YOU MUM  

 hope u like this poem i wrote it 4 me drama monuloguge i also rote a
war one but i cnt find it on me pc lol but enjoy me freinds say its really sad!:
Heaven
In the sky
Mrs Wilkinson
Heaven 123

I often think of all the bad things in life
Like when my father lost my mum - his wife
He lost her through drinking and driving
I remember the doctors saying that there is no way of her surviving
But I suppose that’s all in past
But why do I blame myself because of you going to fast
You and dad had a major row
Cause I member you storming off when daddy called her a cow
But why daddy why
Why did My MUM have to DIE!
My best mates mum always drinks and drives
But she always survives
I really want her back cause I miss her I do!!!!!!!
But then you always say you do to.
Every time I think about what happened to you mum and I cry.
I cant let you go mum, I cant say goodbye.
Every day every one goes on about there horrible mum
But I would trade places with them like you used to say its alright for some!
Daddy says we have to look ahead!
But there is one more thing that I haven’t said……
Even though we are so far apart
There will always be a place for you in my longing heart.
I love and miss you every day
Love your daughter
Faye
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Mullin



Joined: 16 Aug 2004
Posts: 20062
Location: Ivybridge

Tell a Friend Posted: Wed Jun 01, 2005 8:29 am    Post subject:  

Is that a true story?
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Macs34



Joined: 25 Mar 2004
Posts: 3467
Location: Kenya

Tell a Friend Posted: Thu Jun 02, 2005 10:59 am    Post subject:  

:smt022 :smt022
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mcflyfan2005



Joined: 15 Feb 2005
Posts: 179

Tell a Friend Posted: Mon Jun 06, 2005 5:57 pm    Post subject:  

no it inr true but i hop u lyk it?
the truth is i cnt rte happy poems i can only rte sad ones lol

luv yaz charlottexxxx :)
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reddevilleanne



Joined: 20 Oct 2004
Posts: 13228
Location: Nottingham

Tell a Friend Posted: Mon Jun 06, 2005 6:02 pm    Post subject:  

Awww!
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~~debbydo~~



Joined: 18 Jul 2005
Posts: 19959
Location: Hertfordshire

Tell a Friend Posted: Tue Aug 02, 2005 2:51 pm    Post subject:  

thats very good ...
i lost my mum in 97
and i miss her so much even today ..
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Macs34



Joined: 25 Mar 2004
Posts: 3467
Location: Kenya

Tell a Friend Posted: Thu Aug 11, 2005 10:49 am    Post subject:  

~~debbydo~~ wrote: thats very good ...
i lost my mum in 97
and i miss her so much even today ..

Oh you lost mum am sori to hear that!
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