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Gamble
Joined: 25 Nov 2004
Posts: 8
Location: Devon
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| Tell a Friend Posted: Tue Nov 30, 2004 7:46 pm Post subject: concrete street: poem |
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black eyeliner shades the
brown eyes of a lost
girl fashion victim
lost out of passion
fallen for the movement
trial and separation
check for inflation
far too young
far too young
cracked concrete trips oap
no claims no fame
just chaos round head
try to stand lend a hand
let the arm get taken embarrasment
calls for less harrassment
indeed they made the grade
came first
no bleed just a graze
lazy bones i see them
gathering their
lost ribs
and hip joints
scattering around the
town
hanging from telephone
lines singing out of
time
following the same old road |
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Mullin
Joined: 16 Aug 2004
Posts: 20062
Location: Ivybridge
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| Tell a Friend Posted: Wed Dec 01, 2004 10:16 am Post subject: |
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| Nice one! :D |
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Gamble
Joined: 25 Nov 2004
Posts: 8
Location: Devon
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| Tell a Friend Posted: Wed Dec 01, 2004 2:01 pm Post subject: |
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| Tankachun :-P |
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Mullin
Joined: 16 Aug 2004
Posts: 20062
Location: Ivybridge
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| Tell a Friend Posted: Wed Dec 01, 2004 3:03 pm Post subject: |
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| No probs hun! :D |
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~~debbydo~~
Joined: 18 Jul 2005
Posts: 19726
Location: Hertfordshire
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| Tell a Friend Posted: Mon Oct 17, 2005 5:50 pm Post subject: |
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| its good .. |
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bacchus
Joined: 15 Sep 2005
Posts: 169
Location: k.e.n.y.a
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| Tell a Friend Posted: Fri Nov 25, 2005 9:44 am Post subject: |
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deep Gamble- loving the visual I'm getting when I read it-
encore Gamble, encore |
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~~debbydo~~
Joined: 18 Jul 2005
Posts: 19726
Location: Hertfordshire
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| Tell a Friend Posted: Sun Dec 04, 2005 9:04 am Post subject: |
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| Where have theses writers gone. |
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Mullin
Joined: 16 Aug 2004
Posts: 20062
Location: Ivybridge
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| Tell a Friend Posted: Fri Dec 09, 2005 1:49 pm Post subject: |
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| I dont know! I wish could write poems! |
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