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janejade



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Tell a Friend Posted: Wed Nov 24, 2004 3:36 pm    Post subject:  

But he didn't see the rope stretched across the room at ankle height and tripped, banging his head on the wall.
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Mullin



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Tell a Friend Posted: Wed Nov 24, 2004 3:38 pm    Post subject:  

He was out cold...he woke up with a pain in his head he had never felt before...he was dizzy and felt really sick, he was in a dark room with a small stream of light shinning through the bottom of the door...
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janejade



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Tell a Friend Posted: Wed Nov 24, 2004 3:47 pm    Post subject:  

He tried to sit up. That was when he really started to panic. His hands and feet were tied. His movements stilled as he heard a key turning in the lock and the door slowly swung open, creaking omniously.
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Mullin



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Tell a Friend Posted: Wed Nov 24, 2004 3:49 pm    Post subject:  

All he could see was a shadow in the doorway, his eyes hurt to much from the bright light that beamed through the door...the figure was large, the figure spoke to him 'oh you are awake then'....
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janejade



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Tell a Friend Posted: Wed Nov 24, 2004 3:52 pm    Post subject:  

He recognised the voice but couldn't quite place where from. Clearing throat Tim squeeked out his reply...

"Who are you, and where am I?" (yeah, I know, highly original)
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Mullin



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Tell a Friend Posted: Wed Nov 24, 2004 3:53 pm    Post subject:  

The person replied in a sweet comforting voice..it is me Tim....Jenny! We had to keep you here coz...
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janejade



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Tell a Friend Posted: Wed Nov 24, 2004 3:57 pm    Post subject:  

""We had to keep you here cos you saw my Dad, you know his secret & I mant to have your babies.."

Tim screamed.
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Mullin



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Tell a Friend Posted: Wed Nov 24, 2004 3:59 pm    Post subject:  

Before he knew it he was being dragged out of the room...he realised he was under the stairs, he heard pots and pans rattling in the kitchen and the squeaking of the grandmothers chair...they started hauling him up the stairs..
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janejade



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Tell a Friend Posted: Wed Nov 24, 2004 4:03 pm    Post subject:  

and through the kitchen into the lounge. The sight that greated him here made him scream again, until the mum threatened to kiss him better.
Keeping his mouth firmly closed, Timm looked around the room, seeing two other .....
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Mullin



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Tell a Friend Posted: Wed Nov 24, 2004 4:05 pm    Post subject:  

Guys that he recognised from his year, he looked at them with fear in his eyes, one of them raised his finger to his mouth as if to say 'ssshh' so Tim kept his mouth firmly closed....the grandmother hobbled into the room, with her stick and started talking...
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janejade



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Tell a Friend Posted: Wed Nov 24, 2004 4:08 pm    Post subject:  

"Right, you are all our visitors, and I use that word loosely. You came uninvitied so now you are all invited to remain with us - for good. Jenny here is of the age when she's into boys, but we can't have just anyone bing with her. You three have been selected as the most promising from her year, so now you are part of our family."
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Mullin



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Tell a Friend Posted: Wed Nov 24, 2004 4:10 pm    Post subject:  

'You will stay with us until your dying day, you will serve Jenny with everything she needs, we need to start making the Jerico family a little larger....Tim we will start with you....firstly I want you to...
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janejade



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Tell a Friend Posted: Wed Nov 24, 2004 4:13 pm    Post subject:  

Tim heard no more. Jnny was fit, but this was just rediculous. He had a boyfriend. He didn't like girls that way. He swallowed as Jenny came and stood in front of him, her hand on his...
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Mullin



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Tell a Friend Posted: Wed Nov 24, 2004 4:16 pm    Post subject:  

Leg, he shuddered! She looked at him, she looked as though she was not wanting this to happen as much as the other three boys were...her grandmother screamed at her to get on with it....Tim did not remember any more after this moment...he awoke again in...
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janejade



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Tell a Friend Posted: Wed Nov 24, 2004 4:19 pm    Post subject:  

What he assumed was the celler. All three of them were down there, chained to the wall like dogs. No one spoke at first, but eventually the one he knew as Simon spoke.

"So mate.... what was it like?"
"What... what was what like" replied Tim in confusion. Nothing had happened, had it??????
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