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Ratleg_222



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Tell a Friend Posted: Sat Nov 20, 2004 8:27 pm    Post subject: when we she realise??  

"Hey Babe." Danny said as he walked into the room.
Me and Danny have been together for about 2 years now the last year has been rather hard and not much has happened as we haven't really seen each other. Its been hard as Danny and my mum don't get on and whenever the phone rings its always 'if its that Danny Guy who you call your Boyfriend tell him to get lost!' i never took any notice and when danny asked me to move in with him i was in a hurry to go....

what do you think so far?
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Macs34



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Tell a Friend Posted: Sun Nov 21, 2004 8:48 am    Post subject:  

Something close to eh eh eh, first love!!! Oh Yaaah you are in love for the first time, :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol:

If it is not, the character is.

Macs
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Ratleg_222



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Tell a Friend Posted: Mon Nov 22, 2004 9:04 pm    Post subject:  

Macs34 wrote: Something close to eh eh eh, first love!!! Oh Yaaah you are in love for the first time, :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol:

If it is not, the character is.

Macs
lol i dunno what else to write
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Ratleg_222



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Tell a Friend Posted: Mon Nov 22, 2004 9:08 pm    Post subject: Re: when we she realise??  

Ratleg_222 wrote: "Hey Babe." Danny said as he walked into the room.
Me and Danny have been together for about 2 years now the last year has been rather hard and not much has happened as we haven't really seen each other. Its been hard as Danny and my mum don't get on and whenever the phone rings its always 'if its that Danny Guy who you call your Boyfriend tell him to get lost!' i never took any notice and when danny asked me to move in with him i was in a hurry to go....



since i moved in with danny, i have learnt that my mum wont be there for me like she used to be, now i have to tidy up for myself and danny and that. boyz you wouldn't think they'd sin a floor before wud ya. anyway the guyz held a party for me and it was something special not just the odd champange here and there it turned out to be something i'd never forget.
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ash_the_minx



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Tell a Friend Posted: Mon Nov 22, 2004 9:24 pm    Post subject:  

come on the rat girl more!!! :D
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Ratleg_222



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Tell a Friend Posted: Mon Nov 22, 2004 10:05 pm    Post subject:  

ash_the_minx wrote: come on the rat girl more!!! :D
i'll do some 2moz
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Macs34



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Tell a Friend Posted: Tue Nov 23, 2004 6:31 am    Post subject:  

Ratleg_222 wrote: Macs34 wrote: Something close to eh eh eh, first love!!! Oh Yaaah you are in love for the first time, :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol:

If it is not, the character is.

Macs
lol i dunno what else to write

Just say, *clearing his voice* "yaaah baaaaaiiiiiiiibeeee, its never been true till now!!! I can feel it!!!!!" Go hug him en ask him if he knows how lucky he's :lol: seriously do it.

For love comes only ones in a life time for some pepo. (iam presuming you are over age) if yo arent Just go back to yor mum en say, "Mum I am Sori" before itz too late.!!!!

Macs.
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Mullin



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Tell a Friend Posted: Tue Nov 23, 2004 10:14 am    Post subject:  

Yeah tis a good story! :D
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ash_the_minx



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Tell a Friend Posted: Tue Nov 23, 2004 10:24 pm    Post subject:  

Come on Rat girl!! its now 2moro and You said you'd do more and you havent!! grrr!! lol just kidding!!

Righty hows I think Im ill so im going to bed!
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Mullin



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Tell a Friend Posted: Wed Nov 24, 2004 10:36 am    Post subject:  

Awww you poor thing i hope you are feeling a bit better today! :D
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Ratleg_222



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Tell a Friend Posted: Wed Nov 24, 2004 12:14 pm    Post subject:  

ash_the_minx wrote: Come on Rat girl!! its now 2moro and You said you'd do more and you havent!! grrr!! lol just kidding!!

Righty hows I think Im ill so im going to bed!
2nite
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Mullin



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Tell a Friend Posted: Wed Nov 24, 2004 12:21 pm    Post subject:  

Good good! :D
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Ratleg_222



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Tell a Friend Posted: Wed Nov 24, 2004 7:35 pm    Post subject: Re: when we she realise??  

Ratleg_222 wrote: Ratleg_222 wrote: "Hey Babe." Danny said as he walked into the room.
Me and Danny have been together for about 2 years now the last year has been rather hard and not much has happened as we haven't really seen each other. Its been hard as Danny and my mum don't get on and whenever the phone rings its always 'if its that Danny Guy who you call your Boyfriend tell him to get lost!' i never took any notice and when danny asked me to move in with him i was in a hurry to go....



since i moved in with danny, i have learnt that my mum wont be there for me like she used to be, now i have to tidy up for myself and danny and that. boyz you wouldn't think they'd sin a floor before wud ya. anyway the guyz held a party for me and it was something special not just the odd champange here and there it turned out to be something i'd never forget.

as i said it is now 2nite and as i am kinda i'll and kinda upset this bit may be a lil weird

i awoke to
"Deck the halls with bells and holly fa la la la laa la la la la 'tis the season to be jolly fa la la la laa la la la la." it was Tom rehearsing for the day in the studio which was coming up soon. i turned over there was danny looking as fit as ever. i awoke him when in came Dougie.
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ash_the_minx



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Tell a Friend Posted: Wed Nov 24, 2004 8:52 pm    Post subject:  

hahah awesome!
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Mullin



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Tell a Friend Posted: Thu Nov 25, 2004 10:54 am    Post subject:  

Nice one! :D
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