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Ratleg_222



Joined: 19 Nov 2004
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Location: ipswich

Tell a Friend Posted: Thu Nov 25, 2004 8:32 pm    Post subject: Re: when we she realise??  

Ratleg_222 wrote: Ratleg_222 wrote: Ratleg_222 wrote: "Hey Babe." Danny said as he walked into the room.
Me and Danny have been together for about 2 years now the last year has been rather hard and not much has happened as we haven't really seen each other. Its been hard as Danny and my mum don't get on and whenever the phone rings its always 'if its that Danny Guy who you call your Boyfriend tell him to get lost!' i never took any notice and when danny asked me to move in with him i was in a hurry to go....



since i moved in with danny, i have learnt that my mum wont be there for me like she used to be, now i have to tidy up for myself and danny and that. boyz you wouldn't think they'd sin a floor before wud ya. anyway the guyz held a party for me and it was something special not just the odd champange here and there it turned out to be something i'd never forget.

as i said it is now 2nite and as i am kinda i'll and kinda upset this bit may be a lil weird

i awoke to
"Deck the halls with bells and holly fa la la la laa la la la la 'tis the season to be jolly fa la la la laa la la la la." it was Tom rehearsing for the day in the studio which was coming up soon. i turned over there was danny looking as fit as ever. i awoke him when in came Dougie.

"ooooo you had a good night then" Dougie said noticing the items of clothing on the floor.
My head was blurred but i just went along with it although it could turn ugly.
"Yea" i said focussin my eyes
all of a sudden all i could hear was gwen steffani blurring though the walls
"Grrr I'm gonna kill them 3."
i jumped out of bed noticing danny was awake but i ignored him as i left the house i could still hear gwen steffani the song was on repeat. i walked up the garden path and banged on the door.
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ash_the_minx



Joined: 04 Jul 2004
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Tell a Friend Posted: Thu Nov 25, 2004 8:34 pm    Post subject:  

gwen stefani song rocks!!!
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Ratleg_222



Joined: 19 Nov 2004
Posts: 252
Location: ipswich

Tell a Friend Posted: Thu Nov 25, 2004 8:43 pm    Post subject:  

ash_the_minx wrote: gwen stefani song rocks!!!
lol i know
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ash_the_minx



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Tell a Friend Posted: Thu Nov 25, 2004 8:44 pm    Post subject:  

haha I would love to be her for a day!
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Ratleg_222



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Tell a Friend Posted: Thu Nov 25, 2004 8:49 pm    Post subject:  

ash_the_minx wrote: haha I would love to be her for a day!
ha ha
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Mullin



Joined: 16 Aug 2004
Posts: 20062
Location: Ivybridge

Tell a Friend Posted: Fri Nov 26, 2004 9:33 am    Post subject:  

ash_the_minx wrote: haha I would love to be her for a day!

Yeah right! To have that hair and get away with would be awesome! :lol:
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Ratleg_222



Joined: 19 Nov 2004
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Tell a Friend Posted: Fri Nov 26, 2004 4:52 pm    Post subject: Re: when we she realise??  

Ratleg_222 wrote: Ratleg_222 wrote: Ratleg_222 wrote: Ratleg_222 wrote: "Hey Babe." Danny said as he walked into the room.
Me and Danny have been together for about 2 years now the last year has been rather hard and not much has happened as we haven't really seen each other. Its been hard as Danny and my mum don't get on and whenever the phone rings its always 'if its that Danny Guy who you call your Boyfriend tell him to get lost!' i never took any notice and when danny asked me to move in with him i was in a hurry to go....



since i moved in with danny, i have learnt that my mum wont be there for me like she used to be, now i have to tidy up for myself and danny and that. boyz you wouldn't think they'd sin a floor before wud ya. anyway the guyz held a party for me and it was something special not just the odd champange here and there it turned out to be something i'd never forget.

as i said it is now 2nite and as i am kinda i'll and kinda upset this bit may be a lil weird

i awoke to
"Deck the halls with bells and holly fa la la la laa la la la la 'tis the season to be jolly fa la la la laa la la la la." it was Tom rehearsing for the day in the studio which was coming up soon. i turned over there was danny looking as fit as ever. i awoke him when in came Dougie.

"ooooo you had a good night then" Dougie said noticing the items of clothing on the floor.
My head was blurred but i just went along with it although it could turn ugly.
"Yea" i said focussin my eyes
all of a sudden all i could hear was gwen steffani blurring though the walls
"Grrr I'm gonna kill them 3."
i jumped out of bed noticing danny was awake but i ignored him as i left the house i could still hear gwen steffani the song was on repeat. i walked up the garden path and banged on the door.

"Hey, so your up then!" Matt yelled over the music "i thought you & Danny Would still be at it from last night!" he continued
"Funny! will you turn it down" i yelled.
by that time half of the street and a few others were either looking out of they're windows or standing outside
"What i know this is a neighbourhood watch area but it dosen't mean you watch Everything!" I yellled at them
Then a few people went in and some got in their cars
"Just turn it down will ya, Matt!" I yelled once again
"Yea Whatever" he said shuting the door
i jumped over the 30cm fence and ran back indoors.
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ash_the_minx



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Tell a Friend Posted: Fri Nov 26, 2004 7:40 pm    Post subject:  

matts in your story!!! mmm more intersting!! haha I went into my purse a lunch to find someone has placed a picture of matt in the photo bit!!
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Macs34



Joined: 25 Mar 2004
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Location: Kenya

Tell a Friend Posted: Sat Nov 27, 2004 5:20 am    Post subject:  

OKay Go on....... I am listening..

Macs
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Ratleg_222



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Location: ipswich

Tell a Friend Posted: Sat Nov 27, 2004 7:26 pm    Post subject: Re: when we she realise??  

"Hey, so your up then!" Matt yelled over the music "i thought you & Danny Would still be at it from last night!" he continued
"Funny! will you turn it down" i yelled.
by that time half of the street and a few others were either looking out of they're windows or standing outside
"What i know this is a neighbourhood watch area but it dosen't mean you watch Everything!" I yelled at them
Then a few people went in and some got in their cars
"Just turn it down will ya, Matt!" I yelled once again
"Yea Whatever" he said shuting the door
i jumped over the 30cm fence and ran back indoors.[/quote]

dunno what else 2 rite
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Macs34



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Posts: 3467
Location: Kenya

Tell a Friend Posted: Sun Nov 28, 2004 3:10 pm    Post subject: Re: when we she realise??  

Ratleg_222 wrote: "Hey, so your up then!" Matt yelled over the music "i thought you & Danny Would still be at it from last night!" he continued
"Funny! will you turn it down" i yelled.
by that time half of the street and a few others were either looking out of they're windows or standing outside
"What i know this is a neighbourhood watch area but it dosen't mean you watch Everything!" I yelled at them
Then a few people went in and some got in their cars
"Just turn it down will ya, Matt!" I yelled once again
"Yea Whatever" he said shuting the door
i jumped over the 30cm fence and ran back indoors.

dunno what else 2 rite[/quote]

Oh..... C' on!!! Think. Think harder!! Put some more salt where its due. Add some chilly where pepier inst enaf. Put some sugar where sweetnes isnt boilig!!! YO can do it....... I am waiting darling.......

Macs
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ash_the_minx



Joined: 04 Jul 2004
Posts: 12159
Location: cumbria!!

Tell a Friend Posted: Sun Nov 28, 2004 3:28 pm    Post subject:  

this story is soo cool rat girl!
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Ratleg_222



Joined: 19 Nov 2004
Posts: 252
Location: ipswich

Tell a Friend Posted: Sun Nov 28, 2004 7:02 pm    Post subject: Re: when we she realise??  

Ratleg_222 wrote: Ratleg_222 wrote: Ratleg_222 wrote: Ratleg_222 wrote: Ratleg_222 wrote: "Hey Babe." Danny said as he walked into the room.
Me and Danny have been together for about 2 years now the last year has been rather hard and not much has happened as we haven't really seen each other. Its been hard as Danny and my mum don't get on and whenever the phone rings its always 'if its that Danny Guy who you call your Boyfriend tell him to get lost!' i never took any notice and when danny asked me to move in with him i was in a hurry to go....



since i moved in with danny, i have learnt that my mum wont be there for me like she used to be, now i have to tidy up for myself and danny and that. boyz you wouldn't think they'd sin a floor before wud ya. anyway the guyz held a party for me and it was something special not just the odd champange here and there it turned out to be something i'd never forget.

as i said it is now 2nite and as i am kinda i'll and kinda upset this bit may be a lil weird

i awoke to
"Deck the halls with bells and holly fa la la la laa la la la la 'tis the season to be jolly fa la la la laa la la la la." it was Tom rehearsing for the day in the studio which was coming up soon. i turned over there was danny looking as fit as ever. i awoke him when in came Dougie.

"ooooo you had a good night then" Dougie said noticing the items of clothing on the floor.
My head was blurred but i just went along with it although it could turn ugly.
"Yea" i said focussin my eyes
all of a sudden all i could hear was gwen steffani blurring though the walls
"Grrr I'm gonna kill them 3."
i jumped out of bed noticing danny was awake but i ignored him as i left the house i could still hear gwen steffani the song was on repeat. i walked up the garden path and banged on the door.

"Hey, so your up then!" Matt yelled over the music "i thought you & Danny Would still be at it from last night!" he continued
"Funny! will you turn it down" i yelled.
by that time half of the street and a few others were either looking out of they're windows or standing outside
"What i know this is a neighbourhood watch area but it dosen't mean you watch Everything!" I yellled at them
Then a few people went in and some got in their cars
"Just turn it down will ya, Matt!" I yelled once again
"Yea Whatever" he said shuting the door
i jumped over the 30cm fence and ran back indoors.
i dunno emmmmm
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Mullin



Joined: 16 Aug 2004
Posts: 20062
Location: Ivybridge

Tell a Friend Posted: Mon Nov 29, 2004 9:42 am    Post subject:  

Come on I want to hear more! :D
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ash_the_minx



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Location: cumbria!!

Tell a Friend Posted: Mon Nov 29, 2004 7:42 pm    Post subject:  

here here
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